The drenched soul lost deep within my mind,
The dark superiority completely falling behind.
Her visage clear as twilight before the night sky.
As darkness prevails deep within my eyes,
I gaze at the sunset calling my name.
Could it be her, or is this a game?
I have 2 separate thoughts, sunken within my head.
Could she be lost, or could she be dead?
I stumble upon the gifts of down under,
But all I can find is pain and blunder.
The night is now clear, and the morn’s flyin’ high,
Could this be fate calling, or is it a lie?
I stand by the fresh waters of Blunder Hill,
Watching my reflection there, standing still
I gaze and I gaze and think not of fright.
Tonight is the night I’ll lose the world from my site.
I fell and watched the world revolve around me,
As I fell through the night sky.
Splashing in the misty waters.. I drowned,
Never again to be found.
--This is a little piece that I wrote a while ago. Found it in an old diary. Would really appreciate the criticism.