Saturday, 14 May 2011

Fate Calling

The drenched soul lost deep within my mind,
The dark superiority completely falling behind.
Her visage clear as twilight before the night sky.
As darkness prevails deep within my eyes,
I gaze at the sunset calling my name.
Could it be her, or is this a game?
I have 2 separate thoughts, sunken within my head.
Could she be lost, or could she be dead?

I stumble upon the gifts of down under,
But all I can find is pain and blunder.
The night is now clear, and the morn’s flyin’ high,
Could this be fate calling, or is it a lie?
I stand by the fresh waters of Blunder Hill,
Watching my reflection there, standing still
I gaze and I gaze and think not of fright.
Tonight is the night I’ll lose the world from my site.
I fell and watched the world revolve around me,
As I fell through the night sky.
Splashing in the misty waters.. I drowned,
Never again to be found.

--This is a little piece that I wrote a while ago. Found it in an old diary. Would really appreciate the criticism.